Expressive Writing :- Friends !
What did I do to deserve this ? I just found out that some of the people I thought were my friends “ HATED “ me !. They
” BACK-STABBED ME “, when I’m not with them. I felt really hurt I felt agony as I walked along the paths back into our own class room, having to see there faces made it worse especially when it was someone else that told me instead of that person saying it to my face. I felt really hurt. I had no one to turn to. They all “ HATED “ me, but then all of a sudden out of no where I realized that I’m not the person that's hurting them or hating them or even backstabbing them. As long as I have my “ FAMILY “ its fine with me. My father has always told me that if I’m having trouble with my friends, I am not to worry because everything will all fall into place. One Day it will. I am still waiting for that day to come where the people I thought were my friends will eventually become my friends once again.
” BACK-STABBED ME “, when I’m not with them. I felt really hurt I felt agony as I walked along the paths back into our own class room, having to see there faces made it worse especially when it was someone else that told me instead of that person saying it to my face. I felt really hurt. I had no one to turn to. They all “ HATED “ me, but then all of a sudden out of no where I realized that I’m not the person that's hurting them or hating them or even backstabbing them. As long as I have my “ FAMILY “ its fine with me. My father has always told me that if I’m having trouble with my friends, I am not to worry because everything will all fall into place. One Day it will. I am still waiting for that day to come where the people I thought were my friends will eventually become my friends once again.
If you have the same problem as I do, don’t worry about anything it will all fall into place.
This is my BEST writing so far ...
Great Job Latanoa. I like your choice of vocabulary and how you ended off with advice for other people. I believe this is a very good piece of writing because there is not that much things needing to be fixed.
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